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balancing [2-06-2010]

by Ava Blu


it was once easy to enjoy the sight of your face with the lines etching across and swaying to a single drumbeat, but tonight i scratched away chunks of your skin revealing how much there is i no longer wish to see.

02/06/2010

Posted on 02/09/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/09/10 at 03:56 PM

On imagery alone this is nothing short of extraordinary. I for one would give anything to know the full story. That's been a very strong thought with all three pieces you've posted today, but it's especially true with this one. Well done.

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