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Failed Romantic Encounters #10

by Therese Elaine

Sweets for the Sweet! *holds out box of chocolates*
What? Oh...that's right...
I forgot you are diabetic...

02/07/2010

Author's Note: As my friend said, 'Chocolate temptation is a serious foul.'

Posted on 02/08/2010
Copyright © 2024 Therese Elaine

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 02/08/10 at 05:20 PM

Gifter looking shocked/Corner of box lodged in chest/oh the irony/"death by chocolate" ...my bad... I would be sad if his body fell to the ground only to reveal a bouquet of flowers behind his back. ~N

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/08/10 at 05:34 PM

Great write. Great minds think alike. Your attitude is Great! Your attitude towards life is incredible- thanks. This one really made me laugh!

Posted by Richard Colinson on 02/08/10 at 06:10 PM

Nothing quite says I love you like a gift that is both potentially lethal and a reminder of pleasures you can't enjoy.

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