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erased the nays, aye

by Maria Massarella


i let my inner child out today

found mirrored in her eyes the seeds

of a dream



on wings of memory we flew to

spaces where no thing questions and all

simply is







*m.a

02/05/2010

Posted on 02/05/2010
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 02/05/10 at 01:34 PM

Very nice write lady. But what would we do without 'what', 'where', 'why', 'when' and 'how', maybe love.

Posted by A. Paige White on 02/05/10 at 03:05 PM

This is lovely, Maria. There are no sweeter dreams than the dreams of a curious child still exuberantly discovering everything with joy. Thank you for this reminder that with the trust of a child we can face what is.

Posted by Therese Elaine on 02/05/10 at 04:25 PM

Ah the power and beauty of imagination and innocence and the willingness to dream -very lovely Maria!!!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/05/10 at 04:52 PM

Quite lovely.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/05/10 at 06:12 PM

I agree with the above- lovely poem written by a lovely woman- thanks!

Posted by V. Blake on 02/05/10 at 08:58 PM

Short, simple, and sweet. Way to be.

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/06/10 at 05:14 AM

Your inner child and her outward beauty have been missing long from our landscape, Maria. A wonderful read!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/15/10 at 12:18 AM

In the innocence of childhood dreams! Wistful and calm. A deep sense of optimism!

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