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balancing [2-04-2010]

by Ava Blu


i watched you search for hours while the papers were neatly hanging from our ceiling;
you did not try to pull them down, you did not look at my face and you never caught me looking up.
i've watched you search for years when i am right under your nose.

02/04/2010

Author's Note:

find the things you seek without seeking them

Posted on 02/04/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/04/10 at 04:10 PM

A wonderfully worded observation. This kind of makes me think of a really good film called "Wings of Desire." It has that same observer tone going through the lines. Beautiful, quietly sad work.

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