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balancing [2-04-2010]
by Ava Blu
i watched you search for hours
while the papers were neatly hanging from our ceiling;
you did not try to pull them down,
you did not look at my face
and you never caught me looking up.
i've watched you search for years
when i am right under your nose.
02/04/2010
Author's Note:
find the things you seek without seeking them
Posted on 02/04/2010
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/04/10 at 04:10 PM A wonderfully worded observation. This kind of makes me think of a really good film called "Wings of Desire." It has that same observer tone going through the lines. Beautiful, quietly sad work. |
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