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balancing [2-03-2010]

by Ava Blu


i often draw messages in the condensation on the windows in our bathroom; they don't last for long, they are a whim, they are melting before i even leave the room
and you always get to them when it's too late.

02/03/2010

Posted on 02/04/2010
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Therese Elaine on 02/04/10 at 02:11 AM

And even if they get them in time, they often fail to decode them correctly.

Posted by V. Blake on 02/04/10 at 05:38 AM

I once read a short story about how every time we exhale, a little piece of our soul goes with the breath. We usually get it right back after we inhale again--but you really shouldn't be breathing onto mirrors. :) This aside, I love this poem. Short and sweet, and very clever.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/04/10 at 12:50 PM

A lovely note on how we often try to make that great effort through the little things. The image here is quiet and beautifully captured. I hope they notice sometime soon.

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