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Using the back of my hand in an attempt to clear what's unclear

by Jared Orlando

I got nervous,

So with one shaky hand,

I took the whiteout,

Scrubbing out a world,

Through a foggy porthole.

But as clumsy;

As clumsy as I am,

How shaky are my wrists;

I didn’t see you,

And it seems as if

I might’ve erased your features,

With one fell swoop

Leaving you there.

You are just a print;

A copy of an original,

But much colder,

More like a blizzard.

But don’t blame me

You were erased that way.

02/02/2010

Posted on 02/03/2010
Copyright © 2024 Jared Orlando

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by V. Blake on 02/03/10 at 02:55 AM

Phew. For a second there I thought this was gonna be a poem about spousal abuse.

Posted by Therese Elaine on 02/03/10 at 04:44 AM

A person, becoming a memory, becoming a bit ragged, becoming static, becoming white noise...I love it.

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