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by Joe Cramer

All that I could ever want
Would be to hold your hand
So tightly within mine.
Perhaps you might understand.

All that I do now desire
Is to be with you so very close.
As your sweet love lifts me higher
In all that I am, I miss you.

02/01/2010

Posted on 02/01/2010
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/01/10 at 10:16 PM

BEAUTIFUL! This is so romantic- it leaves me breathless- thanks for sharing- right from your heart- just the way ALL (love) poems should be. Couldn't be better.

Posted by V. Blake on 02/02/10 at 12:39 AM

I feel like the official Pathetic spellchecker. You've got a typo in the last line of the first stanza. You may be comforted to know that this is the place where every other typo occurs, and it was likely beyond your control. That aside, your sentiment is totally relatable and I enjoyed this sweet little poem :)

Posted by Johnny Crimson on 02/02/10 at 03:29 AM

How tight we talkin'? Haa, sweet little diddy this way. :)

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