Time shadows by Keith D Allison Ribbons flow in the sunlight squealing box unopened hedges in the garden Sweet in the maze of life Will the water flow or will the earth cover the pain The grave writes the last page some spirit in the wall defining the memories with courage finding the breath in the step till the call 02/01/2010 Posted on 02/01/2010 Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison Member Comments on this Poem Posted by V. Blake on 02/01/10 at 05:43 PM You've got a bit of a typo ("will the dirt covered") in the last line of the first stanza right now, but that is certainly the worst thing to be said of this excellent poem. Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/26/10 at 08:37 PM "Sweet in the maze of life", I find that wonderful and optimistic...for it can be. All these ages are alike, for the goal of a maze is to lose your way, whereas the goal of a labyrinth is to find it. Excellent poetics! Thanks. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)