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Rien
by Rachel Bennettplease, do help yourself
to our plentiful servings
of lacking and empty.
we've got refills
of want and desire
one hundred percent off.
drink up!
you wouldn't want to waste it,
that huge glass of nothing.
you won't regret it
(but we sell that too). 01/30/2010 Author's Note: Poemuary Entry #30.
Posted on 01/31/2010
Copyright © 2024 Rachel Bennett
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 01/31/10 at 04:15 AM Brilliant play on words -totally evokes Tom Waits' "Step Right Up" -I love this! |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 11/08/10 at 05:48 PM I shop here a lot...congrats on POTD... |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/09/10 at 03:03 AM ...rachel, what a gem...fully formed of nothing; and a beautiful nothing it is! |
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