|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/29/10 at 03:48 PM|
...what a delightful write. neatly packaged, tight, this lil' story of the encounter, what a magic carpet ride younger folks give us, in their trust in us...again, a delightfully written piece o' work.
|Posted by Johnny Crimson on 01/29/10 at 03:59 PM|
This is nothing less than wonderful.
|Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/29/10 at 06:16 PM|
Truly enjoyd this story, sweetie.
|Posted by Therese Elaine on 01/29/10 at 07:38 PM|
Why that smug little...
This is fantastic -and there isn't much more to say beyond that.
|Posted by Jersey D Gibson on 01/30/10 at 02:20 PM|
very poetic. Can we say that *ahem* the french (fries) were liberated? -yer pal, Jersey
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/30/10 at 03:00 PM|
Nice storytelling throughout. You definitely know what you're doing when it comes to keeping the interest alive.
|Posted by Julie Adams on 03/14/10 at 06:38 PM|
this lil slice of life is just the perfect ingredient for a poem, well done to capture it and share it as you have...such memories are food for the poetic soul...a pleasure to read you again, peace, jewels xoxox