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Moon
by V. Blakei wanna be the reason
you don't give up on people
but you won't hear me complain
when i just narrowly avoid
destiny.
but sweetheart, i could promise
a thousand suns to you.
just let me paint
the space between the stars
unmuddied blue
just for you,
and i'll smile brighter than the moon,
or any of his friends.
don't let me let you down. 01/28/2010 Author's Note: Poemuary entry #28. First one written and posted whilst drunk.
Posted on 01/29/2010
Copyright © 2024 V. Blake
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 01/29/10 at 04:22 AM You know...if more men were as charming when they were drunk, I might rethink my aversion to meeting people at bars!!! *kidding* It's wonderful -and it is one of those pieces that will always cause that involuntary smile. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 01/29/10 at 01:19 PM I love this little piece...drunk or not, no matter...there is a cosmic beauty it holds, and as I read it, I sink into the unmuddied blue...nice write, sweet little boy blue ;) jk... |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 01/29/10 at 05:01 PM I love this last line... "don't let me let you down" I could interpret it a few different ways. It keeps me wondering. A good thing for a piece of poetry. I like this one. |
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