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Angel In Stilettos
by Terry OlynikHad I known angels
Hid silver daggers
Beneath their wings,
I would surely
Have worn body armour
To our appointed assignation.
As the last spurt
Of overheated blood
Drains lazily from me,
I can only hope
Your pubic bone tingle
Reawakens your conscience. 01/22/2010 Posted on 01/22/2010
Copyright © 2024 Terry Olynik
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/22/10 at 12:42 PM Strong stuff, especially in that first stanza. |
| Posted by Michael Defries on 01/22/10 at 01:01 PM I agree with Gabriel. I got worked up with the imagery. Was that your purpose? Or let us down softly in the second stanza? I really liked "blood
Drains lazily". I still want to see some stilettos... |
| Posted by Amie Golda on 01/28/10 at 05:22 AM Strong imagery indeed. A fine write. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 02/15/10 at 10:55 PM oh now THIS is sweet music. Love this Terry. |
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