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"Couldn't Go Back to Sleep"

by Max Phineas

When I woke to see
It had been a dream
My heart rolled to the floor
and I rolled over
to try and forget
how happy I had been before my eyes opened.

01/20/2010

Posted on 01/20/2010
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Therese Elaine on 01/20/10 at 06:17 PM

I hate when that happens -it's like being robbed of the most precious of intangible things...and that you summed up that feeling so succinctly is wonderful!

Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/20/10 at 06:29 PM

... outstanding.....

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