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A Walk

by Joe Cramer

a walk along the beach with you
setting my soul on fire
the waves dancing upon Atlantic shore
stolling along a windswept pier.

we speak of things not yet said,
from a heart full of words unspoken.
in holding you my musings aspire
all that I long to be is with you.

01/17/2010

Author's Note: ... the musings of a melancholy heart.....

Posted on 01/18/2010
Copyright © 2024 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Amie Golda on 01/18/10 at 07:01 AM

"we speak of things not yet said"---> A simple line and play of words but it somehow catches my eye. The rest is lovely too and the end finishes the poem on a melodious romantic note.

Posted by Allison Smith on 01/18/10 at 07:33 AM

Perfectly beautiful, every woman's dream.

Posted by George Hoerner on 01/18/10 at 02:34 PM

Brings back memories of early love. Very nice.

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