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In Dancing

by Joe Cramer

This is the first time,
And it's not the last time
We dance this dance together.
Two souls converging in the night,
We sing this song as we do.
Laughing, sighing, oohing, aahing,
In the way that we do.
This isn't the first time,
And it is so far from the last time.

01/17/2010

Author's Note: ... to my muse.....

Posted on 01/17/2010
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Therese Elaine on 01/17/10 at 06:13 PM

How lovely -the perfection of the moment and the promise of many more to come...quite the waltz!!!

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 01/17/10 at 09:47 PM

I love the positive upbeat sound of this.The first and next to last line are contradicting yet it doesn't effect the mood this evokes.

Posted by V. Blake on 01/17/10 at 11:32 PM

I don't imagine two souls can converge in the absence of music, and it's nice to see them come together dancing instead of thrashing.

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