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the whole you
by Emily Davidsoninvincible
flawless
astonishing
man
what can't you do?
sharp-witted
quick-thinking
intelligent
being
have you always been so capable?
irresistible
sensual
passionate
creature
where did you learn the map of my desires?
to the onlookers
you seem perfect
i suppose i am the lucky one
for knowing the whole you 01/13/2010 Posted on 01/14/2010
Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 01/14/10 at 05:21 AM Could make you lucky, could be a curse. I love how you leave the reader wondering which. |
| Posted by Amie Golda on 01/14/10 at 06:50 AM "i suppose i am the lucky one
for knowing the whole you"...these lines on their own leave little impact and may even sound cliche. But with the rest of the poem they create a unique twist. Likewise the rest of the poem is simple and nice enough but it's this last line that gives it this flavorful sting.
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