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Omitted Organ
by Anita MacIf I could love you
at this distance,
I would
in less time
than it took the words
to spark in my mind.
But, love at a Distance
is only another form of avoidance
for my poor brain to abuse.
I would.
01/12/2010 Author's Note: ... Meh.
Posted on 01/12/2010
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/12/10 at 09:11 PM I think it's pretty damn good, personally. No "Meh" for you, young lady. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 01/13/10 at 12:52 PM While that organ is absent, I guess it's the thought that counts :> Are you sure you haven't just mislaid your notes?
Final lines can make or break a poem...a commitment to the conditional makes it here. |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 01/14/10 at 05:46 AM I love short pieces that convey such strong truths. This is no exception. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 01/15/10 at 08:04 PM hardly anyone can pull off short poems; no surprise to me that you can do it quite well. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 02/21/10 at 08:21 PM you are awesome! |
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