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In Such a Way

by Joe Cramer

She was beautiful
in such a way
that took my breath away.
I was so very dutiful
in just being so polite.
So verbose, yet so kind.
I know that this sounds so trite,
this is the joy I find.

01/12/2010

Author's Note: ... to my muse.....

Posted on 01/12/2010
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/12/10 at 09:12 PM

Hope she digs it. Nice image.

Posted by Michael Smith on 01/16/10 at 10:53 PM

The simple form and language here helps to evoke this very simple (yet strong) emotion. I love it!

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