| Posted by Michael Smith on 01/11/10 at 12:34 AM All the world is a stage -- your stage -- and you have entered it as subtly as this has been written. Evocative indeed.
I think this is a bit wordy for a Haiku; it could stand to lose a few words (as Haiku being 5-7-5 is a myth).
Would be interesting to see a series of Haiku which manifest what you do on your stage. Thanks for sharing, Joe.
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