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Economy of words [cut to the chase]

by Laura Doom

01/09/2010

Posted on 01/09/2010
Copyright © 2024 Laura Doom

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Creativity
 One Dimensional / Flat
 One Dimensional / Flat
 One Dimensional / Flat
 One Dimensional / Flat
 One Dimensional / Flat
 Form
 Awkward
 Awkward
 Awkward
 Awkward
 Awkward
Imagery
 Lifeless
 Lifeless
 Lifeless
 Lifeless
 Lifeless
 Overall
 Needs Work
 Needs Work
 Needs Work
 Needs Work
 Needs Work
 
Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Boulender on 01/09/10 at 01:55 AM

i've never seen this before!

Posted by Jim Benz on 01/09/10 at 03:35 AM

best laugh I've had all week

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/09/10 at 03:41 AM

Blah/blah/blah.

Posted by Jim Benz on 01/09/10 at 04:12 AM

... and then I go back to re-read a poem I (ambiguously) commented on earlier today - sans rating - only to find someone else low-balled it. Making me look like a castrator. Normally, I couldn't care less about this chicken-@#%$ rating system, but the anonymous slams on this site are starting to get on my nerves. God forbid that POETS, of all people, can't seem to find the words to back up their twitchy little mouse fingers.

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 01/09/10 at 11:01 AM

I gave this the highest rating I could..... for what its WORTH.

Posted by Jolie Jordan on 01/12/10 at 05:16 AM

How clever ;)

Posted by Ulyss Rubey on 08/18/10 at 03:07 AM

FUBAR

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 12/16/10 at 02:51 PM

AND I love it still! :)

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