without... a haiku to lockjaw by Angela Thomas lockjaw, do you know the hardest part? i love him, and he, he loved me. 01/08/2010 Posted on 01/08/2010 Copyright © 2024 Angela Thomas Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Michael Smith on 01/08/10 at 08:00 AM Lockjaw goes both ways! Not a true haiku, but I sincerely appreciate the cleverness, and matter-of-factness of this piece. Posted by Olivia Martin on 01/08/10 at 03:15 PM Nice write, Angela! I especially enjoy the tense change by the last stanza -- it catches one off guard completely, and thus shies away from the typically "woe is me" love poem -- great job. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)