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Haikuclear Bomb

by V. Blake

the one difference
between warfare and heartbreak
is press coverage

01/07/2010

Author's Note: AHAHA! HAIKUCLEAR! GET IT!?! Poemuary entry #7.

Posted on 01/08/2010
Copyright © 2024 V. Blake

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 01/08/10 at 02:21 AM

Simply FANTASTIC! ~N

Posted by Olivia Martin on 01/08/10 at 03:18 PM

Awesome, Vince! Thoroughly enjoyable -- however, I must contemplate a little -- heartbreak is more than evident for celebs -- tiger woods anyone ;) Great job though - powerful and witty.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/08/10 at 08:39 PM

Love it.

Posted by A. Paige White on 01/10/10 at 02:59 AM

Oh this is awesome! From the title to the ending #7 tittle. See. This is why I am ever in pursuit of Haiku! There is just something infinite... satisfying in a succinct form... and the wordplay in your title takes Senryu to a new sunrise. Highest marks all around and my pick for POTD!

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