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No Pun Intended
by V. Blakethe emotions levied
upon a poet with a deadline
are basically watered-down versions
of what the captain of the Titanic felt
as he stood around watching the ship sink. 01/06/2010 Author's Note: Poemuary entry #6. Now I have to study for a test tomorrow.
Posted on 01/07/2010
Copyright © 2024 V. Blake
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/07/10 at 12:54 PM Cute write, but isn't that something like life. We stand, sit, walk, or run around thinking we are accomplishing something or wishing we could. |
| Posted by Olivia Martin on 01/07/10 at 12:55 PM You know, these poemuary pieces are really working out well for you! I love this short little piece -- only a few simple lines stacked with beautiful images that cause the reader pause. Great write and good luck on the test ;) |
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