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He- addresses

by Rachel Bennett

when my words bank and twirl,
feathers taking flight
as white dancers spinning,

and when those feathers
land and adorn your ears
with brilliant plumage
of most expensive colors,

then you will understand.

01/06/2010

Author's Note: the feathers splay six ways, but you hear in one.

Posted on 01/06/2010
Copyright © 2024 Rachel Bennett

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/06/10 at 09:40 PM

I like that opening. It definitely sets the right tone for the rest of it. Nicely done.

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