Posted by Olivia Martin on 01/06/10 at 11:54 AM Well, I must say, Vince, this "drug" works good for you. I especially love the lines: "my blood should crawl/like a black-eyed beggar/away from the pen/that injects these words;" - very poignant beginning that carries the reader from beginning to end. Wonderful write, and please, if you find you have any extra potion, feel free to share - it obviously does amazing things! ;) |