| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/13/09 at 04:21 AM GENIUS! |
| Posted by Peggie Eng on 12/13/09 at 05:08 AM I am reading between the lines... What a message.
I understand..
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| Posted by Ava Blu on 12/13/09 at 10:06 AM clever clever! I listen to you. When I'm around. ;) |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 12/13/09 at 02:07 PM How often we hear but don't really listen to anyone except ourselves. Quite creative Vince. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/13/09 at 03:54 PM ... this is so very imaginative and wonderful! I couldn't rate it high enough..... my vote for POTD!!! |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 12/14/09 at 12:17 AM ...unkay. point very well taken, ahhh, it was between the lines, cool write. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/15/09 at 06:05 AM I know I told you this, but this is masterly clever! Rated high all across the board and into my favs! Thanks. |
| Posted by H.M Stevens on 12/15/09 at 06:41 AM This is a very good point. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/27/10 at 11:25 PM Vince you are the best creative writer on my shelfs or for that matter you are the best ever utterly! |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 08/06/11 at 03:19 AM Very, very, very cool and very true, too! |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 09/30/12 at 06:45 PM Vince, I am a fan of yours already but I just found this gem. Clever, relative, and even without the invisible ink it would make sense, but the invisible ink (and the fact that no one is going to read that until after the fact) adds so much more depth to this piece. |
