my heart steadily scores unaware that my mind steadily ticks
12/08/2009
Posted on 12/08/2009Copyright © 2025 H.M Stevens
I'm not sure that it wasn't intentional, but I I noticed that changing the word "Often" to something like "However" would make this a haiku. It's a syllable short as it stands. Regardless of form, it's still a fun read.