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forgotten star

by Ava Blu



Posted on 12/04/2009
Copyright © 2022 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by V. Blake on 12/04/09 at 06:27 PM

Alright, so as a huge fan of photography, let me just say that this poem is amazing twice over. Hugely creative, absolutely beautiful, and poignant as anything I've ever read. Adding this to my favroties.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/05/09 at 12:04 AM

Even without those stunning pictures this would be one of your best. That third stanza manages to be more beautiful than any of these snapshots, and that's saying something.

Posted by Anita Mac on 12/05/09 at 02:48 AM

This whole piece is breath-taking. The pictures are divinely paired with your words!

Posted by Quinn Vokes on 12/05/09 at 03:46 AM

absolutely phenomenal, and so original and honest and breath-taking. I love it.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 12/10/09 at 03:35 PM

Ava, you are gifted with your use of imagery in both words and set. The photographic delivery in this enhances your poem ~ goose bumps...

Posted by Michael Smith on 01/14/10 at 06:55 AM

To me, this is unique and divinely orchestrated. It reminds me of postsecret.com,but better than a single image. This is a true piece of art, as it envelopes this moment, our moment, with your experience. It's simplicity and subtleness has a sweetness, which is very endearing and evocative. Very well done, love.

Posted by Sarah Wolf on 09/03/12 at 08:55 PM

It is always beautiful when we feel comfortable with ourselves...

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