I'm probably reading way to deep into this and that's fine. It's what poetry is all about. This strikes a chord in me that is unbelievable. You have no idea what I've just had happen but know your words are a solace and speak when I can't.

Isn't it so that any song we choose to sing is given equal opportunity to go off-key. Many great images and muse-ical sounds here. Nice write. Thanks.

...nanette was right, it speaks volumes; the dressage of the first stanza sets it in motion and it trails right along, love the last line, young folks like you can use the word "time"[as in not having enough] .this is right up there with your work; measured, punchy and heavy...great write.