| Posted by V. Blake on 11/26/09 at 07:42 PM "Stab them with your laughs and smiles." was a dark way to open this up, and it only got bleaker from there. This is a very powerful piece, though I wonder if your third-to-last line isn't a typo with "Take in all in" That aside, this poem definitely managed to catch me totally off guard, and I gotta say job well done to any writer who does that :) |
| Posted by Anne Boulender on 11/27/09 at 05:06 AM I'm grew up in Washington State and always lived near Indian reservations as a kid. I always wanted to visit one. I've always thought Indians were cool. They have their own laws, as well they should. Anyway, its almost like some people are only met to live a certain life and if they stray from it or it is taken away from them then they don't know what else to do since they can't live out what was intended for them. |