We Two by Rachel BennettSomehow we two are one -
Sharing skin already
By bone and sinew stretched,
We are as sponge and water -
Each fuller with both
And both more useful than each.
Somehow we two are two -
With hook and loop we embrace,
Maintaining line, though fill
May bleed over across us -
Though halves of the same fruit,
Separate halves we remain.
Somehow we two are three -
Root and fifth mingling,
Amazed, we clearly hear nearby
A voice of honey and biscuits -
Placated, we float from
Three two one.
11/09/2009 Posted on 11/10/2009 Copyright © 2024 Rachel Bennett
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Julie Adams on 11/12/09 at 04:37 PM what I love so much in this piece, is how you play with your work, like ivy upon a trellis, u curl and twist and tease the reader with your lines...I also love how your stanzas work independently, each with their own fresh imagery and ideas...kudos, nice read, peace, jewels |
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