For-giving support (my second haiku)

by Phil P Robson

A bamboo bridge -
old friends convene
to help you through


Posted on 11/04/2009
Copyright © 2022 Phil P Robson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/05/09 at 12:30 AM

...a great second haiku, well said and use of terminology, i.e. bamboo bridge and needing friends to get us thru.

Posted by Joe David on 11/05/09 at 04:14 AM

Charlie said it right. Excellent haiku. It is simple and yet evocatively thoughtful.

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