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Falling (My first Haiku)
by Phil P RobsonChasing profits
hiding from morals -
we lose our balance
11/04/2009 Author's Note: A bit simple and predictable, but Haikus are harder than they look!
Posted on 11/04/2009
Copyright © 2024 Phil P Robson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/05/09 at 12:33 AM ...well, while haikus arrrre not easy, you do a great job of it/them. rumi, issa, are my favorites. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/05/09 at 12:35 AM and one more thing. this haiku is really pinging the string, with balance being lost because of hiding from morals...woweee, top drawer concept usage. |
| Posted by Peggie Eng on 11/05/09 at 04:40 PM Very well done... |
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