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the kid down the street

by Charlie Morgan

i'm a busy man; just yesterday,
i was pocketing a new moment,
and trying to sort out old ones.
but, on my porch today, resting.


when he stepped up to the porch,
he was drenched in innoncence;
shaking off the morning darkness,
settling in Sunshine, he starts:


"i passed Sisyphus, he was pushing his boulder;
he nodded as i pushed mine by him; a grin
accompanied his falling sweat o' the aeons.


everybody's relenting devotion is to self;
makes the weight of life shift.
troubles pile-up; a mound of fall leaves."


practicing to be a poet, his mind feeds
on Ego and old pirate jokes; hungriest
is his ego, old pirate jokes don't last.


as he shifts his gaze dodging the Sun,
looking with a squint into my eyes,
where's Kai? inside? at the sitters?

he asks. really the kid wants me to read
his latest poetic lines: pronounce him: Ralph
Waldo Emerson and instead i say:

Shakespeare! finally, great to meet you;
wonderful to meet the great Shakespeare!
he walks off mumbling, 'the world is a stage.'

11/04/2009

Posted on 11/04/2009
Copyright © 2026 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/04/09 at 06:17 PM

..... brilliant.....

Posted by Kris Mara on 11/04/09 at 10:31 PM

agreed, this is brilliant, every line (what more could there be to say? pulled me in from the first word...kept me reading in amazement all the way through)

Posted by Joe David on 11/05/09 at 04:04 AM

Archimedes took a swing at Sisyphus but hit the boulder instead jarring the lever right out of his hand and that's what made the weight of life shift. Dude, I love this thing. You are developing a hell of a fine style of writing. I really enjoy the seemingly casual quality that only comes with practice and effort and developing your native talent. Chaz Man you are becoming a mature poet and I mean that as a highest compliment. This is some excellent work.

Posted by Maude Curtis on 11/05/09 at 08:23 PM

keep on inspiring Kai and his buddies. I'm sure you're the hit of the neighborhood with your tales of life gone by. :)

Posted by A. Paige White on 11/06/09 at 06:55 PM

Ah... Chaz... Did you notice me pickpocket this moment from you with a giggle at the final line? Love it!

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