Iberia by Rachel BennettPeninsular daydreams of Iberia:
I wish they wouldn't so abruptly
stop,
And retreat from breezy syncopations
and rocky cliffs and crags
to this, this landlocked gravity. 11/01/2009 Author's Note: I'm not too sure about this one.
Posted on 11/02/2009 Copyright © 2024 Rachel Bennett
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Posted by Jason Wardell on 11/02/09 at 07:22 AM I like it! It's not hard to get tied up in thoughts and yearnings for elsewhere: the place that operates at a slightly different rhythm. I'm left wanting more, though, and there's definitely a lot that can be said on the subject. However, as a sketch or as a start, it's great. |
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