On The Verge by Jennifer LawrenceHe said he wants to watch me sleep
Could such an intimate request I keep?
Those whispered words
so soft and sweet
straight to my heart
cut quick and deep
In seeking this
he did imply
that in his arms
my dreams would lie
And how this nascent love has moved
from tender glances to closer truth 10/04/2009 Posted on 10/04/2009 Copyright © 2024 Jennifer Lawrence
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/04/09 at 07:09 PM ... well done... welcome to Pathetic!!! |
Posted by Timothy Burns on 10/04/09 at 11:18 PM this just takes my breath away. You create atmostphere with such ease and grace. |
Posted by Jennifer Ragan on 10/08/09 at 12:17 AM This reads like a childs prayer..soft and sweet |
Posted by Mo Couts on 10/13/11 at 04:08 PM Ditto what the others said...this is wonderfully delightful and grabbed me in...nicely done! |
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