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Chained Heart

by Joe Cramer

I wanted just to succinctly say
How I truly feel on this same day.
But no one would listen to me,
Or my chained heart is never free.
Instead, I merely pen this verse,
There could be things far worse
Than all the words I forever impart
Spilling forth from this chained heart.

09/30/2009

Author's Note: ... forever searching.....

Posted on 10/01/2009
Copyright © 2024 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Shannon McEwen on 10/01/09 at 05:37 AM

very sad peice Joe (been here, you captured it well), One suggestion, instead of repeating "chained" possibly replace with "begging" or something else in the last line?

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