| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jo Halliday on 09/13/09 at 06:30 AM Excellent! |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/13/09 at 02:51 PM ... this is wonderful..... |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 09/13/09 at 07:29 PM after all the dark imagery; the last line brought in a shot of color at just the right moment. very nice, yes. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/14/09 at 07:09 AM Wow. At first this felt like falling through some wet forest and then sunshine fills soul! Great job and welcome to pathetic! |
| Posted by V. Blake on 11/26/09 at 12:11 AM Well, with a name like Desdemona Sinestra, I was hoping for somethign dark, and you delivered. This is wonderful. Adding this to my favorites. |
| Posted by Michael Smith on 01/27/10 at 05:18 AM Wowwww, this is immersive! Such potent imagery! A perfect POTD, Congrats! |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 01/27/10 at 07:12 PM This is amazing...so utterly visceral, tangible and grim with a dash of devil-may-care and a sense of lighting the match and letting it all burn behind you...love it. |
| Posted by Amie Golda on 01/28/10 at 02:46 AM "i want to look at a phone" such a simple line but speaks volumes and leads to lines that get much deeper and deeper and more vivid with each word. A well layered poem indeed. Well done. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Shaw on 01/28/10 at 03:37 AM yes, so tight this poem rivets. nice |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 02/23/11 at 10:49 PM i love the language in this and the flow. too awesome! |
