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Schrödinger's poem

by Jim Benz

A semantic meaning is crafted within a poetic structure,
along with the following device (which must be secured
against direct interference by the meaning): in the final
strophe, there is a self-referential contradiction, so
insignificant that perhaps in the course of a reading, one
of its implications has a subtle impact, but also, with equal
probability, perhaps it does not; if recognition occurs, the
device reverses the previous thrust of the poem, and
through an irreconcilable paradox releases an epiphany
that wavers on the cusp of irrational chaos. If one opens
this poem to the vagaries of a reading public, one would
say that its meaning is still coherent if meanwhile the
contradiction has gone undetected. The poetics of the
entire structure would complicate this, however, by having
within itself both a coherent and an incoherent meaning,
each of which potentially express themselves as entirely
separate manifestations of the poem, while at the same
time, in their juxtaposition, creating a third implication
which is entirely beyond the scope of language or rational
thought.

It is typical of these poems that an indeterminancy
originally restricted to the polysemic domain becomes
transformed into literary indeterminacy, which can then be
isolated and reproved via close reading. That invites us to
discursively reject as invalid a "blurred poetics" devoid
of meaningful content. In itself, however, this poem
would not embody anything unclear or meaningless, for
each reading contains within itself a logical structure
geared toward a given end. Hence, there is a difference
between a shaky or out-of-focus poem and a poetic
device which creates an invigorating mind-fuck. The
question remains: is such a practice meaningful, and if
so, what is the force of meaning?

09/04/2009

Posted on 09/04/2009
Copyright © 2026 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 09/06/09 at 09:47 PM

I keep trying to find that self-referential contradiction; I brought my best detectives in...

Posted by Paul Lastovica on 09/07/09 at 07:09 PM

consider me invigorated

Posted by Laura Doom on 09/12/09 at 12:13 AM

Well, yes and no I guess. For me the poem was alive until I engaged with the semantics -- mean of me perhaps, and beyond my comprehension...

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