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august twenty-second

by Ava Blu

i should replace sounds with words,
redefine the meanings behind the moans
i faked when we fucked;

you can't even afford to find out
the truth,

and we both know you'd never paint
the town red again.

08/23/2009

Posted on 08/23/2009
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/23/09 at 04:40 AM

I know I wouldn't want to be on the end of anger like this. No question about that. There's a lot of fury in this, but it never comes off as bitter or spiteful. It's just good, pure and very righteous anger. Because of that every well-placed word has all the weight in the world behind it. Another great one to keep the August momentum rolling.

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