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august twenty-first
by Ava Bluyou were unusually clean,
even with a cigarette hanging from your lips,
and i wanted to reach for it
to take in something that had been a part of you
but i was always too dirty. 08/21/2009 Posted on 08/22/2009
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/22/09 at 02:21 AM Well, you've made me put my foot in my mouth once again. Every time I think it can't get any better with you, you come up with something like this. Clever, brutal, a little on the heartbreaking side and just flawless. I sincerely hope you regard this and the whole August series as some of your best work. I honestly don't see how you can top this one, but I'm totally prepared for the likelihood of that. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/22/09 at 03:34 PM ... this is incredible..... |
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