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august thirteenth

by Ava Blu

i've had to live with my choices,
the things i say are not regrets;

it's time you live with yours.

08/13/2009

Posted on 08/14/2009
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/14/09 at 02:16 AM

Short, direct and very well said. Absolutely perfect.

Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 08/14/09 at 03:58 AM

The last line applies to both first lines so eloquently. Quite extraordinarily really. ~JPP

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