| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 08/13/09 at 11:18 PM i think that qualifies as 'seeing what can be' instead of only 'seeing what is' - looking the surface of things, yes. Nice point of view me thinks. |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 08/13/09 at 11:19 PM *past the surface of things |
| Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 08/14/09 at 04:02 AM You simply read between the lines, you infer without assuming. You can deduce what others cannot or will not. You are light years ahead. Keep that way. ~JPP |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 08/18/09 at 05:53 AM I've said for the longest time, though I doubt I really grasp the entire truth of it...it's all in the space inbetween. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 11/23/09 at 10:31 PM what is in-between makes way for balance and clarity and being able to "see to see". lovely poem. |
