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The Blue Hour

by Scott Cadence


time begs
for a breath
away

even
if it's only
for a moment

I try
to loop you
around me

and make
the work week
disappear

like
a song
on repeat

sometimes
you're just a mood
that I need to feel
on every part
of me

loosing
my lines
above you

our bodies
melting into
each other

till I
can no longer
tell who's heartbeat
is moving
the bed

right now
I feel so much more
than the man
I might not be

always recovering
another artifact
that I discovered
in your eyes

lost relics
and family
heirlooms

silly novel
of proverbs -
the blessings,
and a curse

I cherish
all the elements here,
working and weaving
into the scene

even
your stubborn ways,
that catch me off guard
reeling my body
backwards

I recognize
the amateur
I will always be
in this body
– agreed

but my heart
is steadfast
bounding forth

so I’ll jump without
any reservation
into controversy

and
hopefully
land with perfect form
right back
next to you

in the blue
hour.

08/12/2009

Posted on 08/13/2009
Copyright © 2024 Scott Cadence

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Allison Smith on 08/13/09 at 12:27 PM

This had me at hello :)

Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 08/16/09 at 11:31 PM

Scott, You always give me hope that there might be another you out there for me ;) Oh... this is beautiful! ~N

Posted by H.M Stevens on 09/30/09 at 01:16 AM

brilliant. especially: "till i can't tell who's heartbeat..." that's got to be some scientific definition of love.

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