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Radiant Perfection (I Wish to Bring You)
by Alison McKenzieAt long last
I feel the blending of realities,
The bleeding of those blessings
Sliding into this life,
The veil of valor pierced
And radiating into suns.
Stepping out of limits
Freedom of thought and choice abounding…
A radiant perfection,
The twirling of dervishes
Finds my joyful heart
Incites me to dance;
My being can only respond
By gliding into the rhythm.
Come with me now,
I wish to bring you.
08/09/2009 Posted on 08/09/2009
Copyright © 2025 Alison McKenzie
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by V. Blake on 08/09/09 at 08:19 PM The twirling of dervishes is just plain fun to say. On top of that, the rest of this is just plain excellent writing. I don't know if you've ever heard the song (which sounds more like the reading of a poem) Melodies & Desires by Lykke Li, but this reminds me a bit of it. You should check it out! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/09/09 at 09:04 PM I'm on my way, just let me grab my flouncing black ;) |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/09/09 at 09:05 PM Feeling good passing-it along poem, this. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/09/09 at 10:55 PM ...blinded by the light! like ElizbethJill says... sorta a pay it[tbat good feeling] forward. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 08/10/09 at 02:47 PM All that spinning can create some really amazing energy! I am spinning too!! |
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