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heart check

by Brynn Dizack

today was:

a.) yours
b.) someone else's
c.) two days

come on, come on, put your weight(less) on me,, your rabbit-pulse, the racket of your hair, your waterglobe eyes, and the freckle-filled hourglass of your torso //

oh hourglass,
hourglass,,

pour slowly,,

i fear we are running out of time.

08/07/2009

Posted on 08/07/2009
Copyright © 2024 Brynn Dizack

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maude Curtis on 08/07/09 at 01:39 PM

I would say your heart is beating strong. This is really good. I like, I like!

Posted by Olivia Weinkein on 08/07/09 at 07:25 PM

amazing. glad to be able to read you again.

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