One of a kind (original) by Keith D Allison that tempest she said I'd remember her lips touched mine eighteen thousand two hundred and fifty days ago give or take a breath or so She walked another trail so long ago All Just another unimportant Matter but I remember that tempest of time So I'll tip my hat too that girl she made my heart fluttered she was that sweet chaos to the mind she brought a new fire to melody putting the song to life… guitar Oh The songs and the glory that could be written to life first kiss especially the one that awakens the heart she was one of a kind she led me down that road where the heart does flutter the sweetness still dances on the sky's with stars of remembrance she brought a new fire to melody putting the song to life… guitar 08/06/2009 Posted on 08/06/2009 Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 08/07/09 at 07:53 PM What a great scene setter, from the first stanzs, "eighteen thousand two hundred and fifty days ago/give or take a breath or so", wow, and later near the close this expanse of love is measured again, "on the skies/with stars of remembrance." Just beautiful, Keith. Thanks. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)