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august first
by Ava Bluthe pictures have it,
creating a new vision
that wasn't inside me before;
and i,
this observer,
this individual,
can only take
what you let me. 08/01/2009 Posted on 08/02/2009
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/03/09 at 03:18 AM A great opening to the latest August series. What I like about it the most is the lack of surprise in the voice of this piece. There's a great confidence in it, and you make that confidence absolutely in just a few short lines. Wonderful. |
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