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The Night Starfish Tore My Sweetheart Apart

by Terry Olynik













I'm sorry, this never actually happened.


They were lamprey eels.






Starfish seemed more poetic.













Please resume your poetic explorations elsewhere.
Again, sorry.















Frankly, there were no eels involved either.
















...please, just leave.

06/27/2009

Posted on 06/27/2009
Copyright © 2025 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 06/28/09 at 08:35 PM

I am suprised no comments on this yet.It is highly creative in expressing a "break up". It tends to leave one not knowing what to say....like when a friend's loved one dies, leaving one with a loss of words, expressing the symphathy.

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