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quatre vingt

by Manas Moksha

Four times twenty
at the boundary fence
a glimpse back
each new blade of grass
and footsteps leading
towards me

06/14/2009

Posted on 06/15/2009
Copyright © 2024 Manas Moksha

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alex Smyth on 08/20/09 at 02:18 AM

If a man be especially strong he may live to be 80... you seem a bit young to be at THAT fence:o) Nicely done, interesting analogy in a unique presentation.

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