quatre vingt by Manas MokshaFour times twenty
at the boundary fence
a glimpse back
each new blade of grass
and footsteps leading
towards me 06/14/2009 Posted on 06/15/2009 Copyright © 2024 Manas Moksha
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Posted by Alex Smyth on 08/20/09 at 02:18 AM If a man be especially strong he may live to be 80... you seem a bit young to be at THAT fence:o)
Nicely done, interesting analogy in a unique presentation. |
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